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Chapter 40: A Quiet Morning

Dawn had hardly opened the door to her room before she was fairly pounced upon and dragged to her bed by Corrie, Edie, and Naomi. They sat her down and crowded around her so she couldn't get up, practically screaming, "How did it go?"

She laughed and tried halfheartedly to push them away. "Come on, guys, I can't breathe!"

They inched away, but still wouldn't let her up. "Come on, how did it go?" asked Edie.

Dawn sighed, but couldn't help grinning. "Surprisingly well. I ended up telling him about everything that's going on and he took it well. As in, he doesn't think I'm crazy. Apparently he knew about magic growing up."

"Well, didn't you know about magic growing up, too?" asked Naomi.

"Sure, I guess so... I mean, my aunt did magic sometimes, but everything she showed me was silly stuff, not part of everyday life like it was for Rico." That was why she was sure her aunt knew a lot more than she ever revealed. She would have to give Aunt Pru a call if she ever got a chance. "What about you, Corrie? Your family are witches, right?"

She shrugged. "Any magic we did was just kitchen witchery. Cooking up meals that were supposed to bring good luck and stuff like that. My mom and grandmother were never into the big ritual-type stuff. I don't even know if any of the magic they did worked." She leaned forward, looking worried. "So what do you think you're going to do about Annie?"

"I don't know." Dawn sighed, feeling exasperated. It probably wouldn't have been so bad if she hadn't been constantly asking herself the same question and not coming up with a satisfactory answer. "I guess I'll go visit Lorelei first thing in the morning and see what she has to say. Hopefully she'll be willing to explain just what's going on. She never seemed to want to before."

"She probably didn't want you involved if you didn't have to be," Naomi said.

Dawn tried to smile. "Yeah. I guess it's too late for that, though."



Sunday, August 31

Dawn had tossed and turned all night. When she did sleep, it was lightly, plagued by dreams in which she was laying in her bed, but the forest was climbing in around her. She kept hearing screams that seemed to come from close by or far away, but when she shook her head in the light of the morning, they faded to mere echoes in the back of her mind, and she knew this time they really were dreams.

She padded barefoot to the bathroom, listening to the silence. She hadn't noticed what time it was, but she could tell it was early from the quality of light coming in the window and the fact that there were no other sounds. She wondered whether Corrie was already up and outside running. Maybe she should join her. But Dawn didn't really feel awake, just buzzing with nervous energy. She took a long, hot shower, trying to soothe her nerves. It didn't help, but it was nice to bathe without the uncomfortable feeling of knowing there were other people in the same room.

There was no more sound when she returned to her room. Naomi was still asleep. She quietly opened her computer and turned it on, holding her hand over the speakers so the sound wouldn't disturb her roommate. Maybe the hospital's website would give visiting hours. Lorelei wouldn't be in ICU, would she? No, if it was just an asthma attack, that was something easy to deal with. Not that she really believed that, but unless Lorelei was totally unable to breathe on her own, she shouldn't be in ICU.

Visiting hours started pretty early, thankfully. She would have to find out where Lorelei was once she got to the hospital. She started to stand up, then realized she couldn't go by herself. Even if she was totally comfortable going alone, she had no way to get to the hospital, unless it was within walking distance. She sat back down and looked around on the site. Yes, it had Chatoyant College as a landmark. She could walk there, but it would be a long, tiring walk. She'd better wait for Corrie so she could drive. Her friends probably didn't want her to go alone anyway.

Restless, Dawn stood up and walked around. She checked out the window to make sure it wasn't foggy. There were wisps of fog floating around near the ground, but nothing to stop them from going anywhere. The rest of the campus was quiet, though. She debated going over to Corrie and Edie's room to see if Corrie was up yet, then finally decided she might as well check. Slipping her feet into shoes, she walked the short distance to their door and knocked gently, thinking that if they were sleeping, they wouldn't hear the knock.

To her relief, the door opened shortly. Corrie was in loose yoga pants and a sweaty T-shirt. "Hey," she said softly. "If you wanted to join me on my run, you're a little late."

Dawn grinned. She glanced toward the bed, saw that Edie was still asleep, and matched her tone to Corrie's. "Maybe someday. I just couldn't sleep and wanted to see if anyone was awake yet. The hospital is already open for visiting hours, and I want to get over there as soon as I can."

"And you need me, right?" Corrie nodded. "Well, I definitely have to have a shower before I go anywhere. But you can hang out in here until I get back. Edie will probably want to come along, too."

She followed Corrie back into the room and selected a book from the crowded shelves. It was nice to have a friend who'd brought a lot of books to school, she reflected. She settled down on Corrie's bed with it while the blonde headed out to the showers. After a few minutes, she heard noises from the other side of the room and looked up. Edie was sitting up in bed, pushing her hair out of her face. "Hi," she said, her voice thick with sleep. "What're you doing here?"

Dawn marked her place with her finger and put the book in her lap. "Waiting for Corrie. I need her to drive me to the hospital so I can talk to Lorelei."

"Oh. Right." Edie picked up a shirt and regarded it critically. "D'you mind waiting for me too? I'd like to have a shower, but I want to come too."

"Um..." Dawn looked up at their clock, biting her lip. Well, visiting hours lasted a long time. And she couldn't exactly make her friends stay behind, could she? "Okay. Don't take too long."

"I won't."

Dawn went back to her book and waited for her friends.

Comments

Neener neener!

I'm sure MystycalMage will be along shortly to grumble about her late comment number. Anyway, now that I'm current again--nice chapter, but it seems heavy on connecting material and fairly light on plot development. I know they can't all be cliffhangers; I'm just writing what I notice :)

Offended...

I do not grumble or complain about late comment numbers, especially when I *know* that I will be posting late. (I was out of town for a few days). I actually like it when others post before me, but if that starts happening too often, I might have to start refreshing at 10 PM and wait for the update :P

Aww...

:( Don't take offense, take a gate. It's lighter and easier to carry.

Great Chapter

I am wondering if Naomi is going to end up going to the hospital also.

It is kinda of amazing that Dawn is so inccent when it comes to real magic. It just seems that she should be more aware of herself and what she can do.

Naomi?

Why would Naomi end up in the hospital? (I think you might mean Dawn??)

Innocent

This is the first time Dawn has seen any sign that she has magic abilities. She's just as surprised by it as anyone else.

Also

The nature of the world is to suppress the thought that there is magic in the world. At least if the world is based off of ours. So some poeple can have magic and use it every day they live and never know they are doing it.
It is just something they do, like breathing.

All caught up again. Looking forward to more.

Naomi's Magic

It might be a sixth sense or something and not really an actual ability.

Style

Just a styling suggestion...

I think that the day/date "Sunday, August 31" should be offset somehow, you know...to show people that time has passed...that kind of thing. *** or _______________....something like that.

Also, in regards to the date...They sure are starting the semester pretty late in the year, aren't they?

Dates

I keep meaning to put the dates in italics. I think that's the only thing that makes any sense. It involves a couple of extra steps though :-P Maybe I'll do it tomorrow... I usually try to signal time passing through the text, though saying "The next day" seems redundant when I've just put a date change. Is that not enough? Is it confusing?

I don't think it's very late... I don't have any of my old school calendars but I seem to remember the first Monday being as close to September 1 as possible. I don't think I planned for their first Monday to be September 1, though! Actually, now that I think about it, I'm pretty sure I did look at one of my college calendars to pick their start date. The start date I used might have been the first day of classes rather than freshman move-in day, but that's still just a few days different.

Okay, I want to get this right so I found the calendar for my college this academic year. Freshmen move-in day was August 28 and the first day of classes was actually September 3.

Well for me...

September is LATE to start classes. My school starts classes the first week in August. Of course, we also get out the first week in December, too. We also usually start Spring Semester halfway into January.

Semesters

Your summer probably starts earlier than ours, then--we get out mid-December, but don't go back for spring semester until the end of January. I thought we were the only ones with such a ridiculously long break!

Classes

Start back here on the 12th of January and there is a week long spring break and the semester's final exams are on May 4th-7th.

as to my last one i meant

as to my last one i meant dawn and to MystycalMage i think she was wondering if naomi would be going with them

"I won't."

Putting Dawn's name right after "I won't" makes it feel like those are her words, but they of course aren't. Just feels a little clunky...

Also, I agree something should be done about the date in the middle of the story. Italics will probably be enough. You could also consider adding another linefeed above it to separate the days slightly.

Thanks

I wondered if that would work or not. Since one person didn't like it, I guess it didn't work!

I've tried adding extra spaces and it doesn't work... though maybe if I told it to be full HTML it would work.

Looks fine

On my screen, it looks fine, just as I would expect to see in one of those fancy book things.

Fancy book things

Oh, those crazy paper books!

Changing the input style to full HTML does seem to have done the trick. At some point I will go back and italicize all the other datestamps.

Paper books

I'm afraid that people are going to suggest that they not publish paper books any more because it's using trees. That would suck if the power ever went out or if the world crashed and there wasn't an internet any more. Plus it would almost require that everyone buy an Amazon Kindle.

Or an iPhone

The guys who wrote Cradle to Cradle have a solution to that potential problem: their book is made out of some kind of weird recyclable material. Not as good as a real book, but better than no physical books at all. Thankfully, I haven't yet heard anyone suggest that books should stop being printed because of trees.

CDs, on the other hand, and their plastic... well, I don't see much reason not to try to buy digital music exclusively.

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