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Chapter 25: Release

When Corrie started to bring herself into trance, she realized that she was glad to have her friends there, even if she had argued that they didn’t need to come. Not that she expected an attack, but the faeries were obviously up to something weird, and if something happened while she was still in trance, she could be helpless. She couldn’t move while still in trance, not unless she wanted to fall down again, but Dawn and Edie could easily keep an eye out for her. It wasn’t likely that she’d need them, but it was better to have them there anyway.

When she was fully in trance and opened her eyes, she was surprised and interested by the view. Everything around them sparkled. Yes, everything sparkled normally when she was in trance—it was all the magic in the living things around them. And the magic building, of course, had plenty of magic in it from use over the years. But right now their immediate area seemed even more sparkly than usual. She’d seen the magic building in trance from the inside just last week, and it hadn’t looked like this.

But this was probably normal. The spring semester magic students probably got to practice outside—after all, they had done so for air magic, and it hadn’t exactly been nice weather that day. Maybe this was where they always practiced and the ground and walls had become saturated with magic. It was something else to ask Professor Lal about, if it came up.

Now, though, she had work to do. She turned her attention to Paul. He was still standing there calmly, but now instead of just seeing what he looked like, she could see his magic, too. It was a dull blue mass near the top of his chest, looking like a ball of spaghetti with tendrils that waved feebly. Were those tendrils attached to her? No, that was his own magic, all inside of him, like her own glowing ball of power. His was similar except for the tendrils, but the light was foggy, and it was smaller.

She couldn’t see anything else that looked like magic around him, though, other than what was naturally in the earth. She frowned, wanting to walk around him to get a clearer look, but she knew it wasn’t possible. She tried to speak, but her throat was dry, so she swallowed and tried again. “Paul, can you turn around slowly for me?”

Her voice came out small and breathy, but Paul nodded and held his arms out from his sides before turning around in a slow circle. She thought she saw bits of mist being thrown from his body, but that might just have been ordinary mist. The campus did get foggy. And they didn’t seem to end up anywhere, just disappeared.

“Okay,” Corrie said quietly when he’d finished turning. “I think I need some help. Dawn, can you do something for me?”

“Of course,” Dawn said quickly.

“Go stand between us and look at us in trance? There has to be something connecting us in some way, but I can’t see it.”

“Sure.” Dawn stepped in front of her and positioned herself between the two of them. Corrie couldn’t see her face, but Paul was frowning. Dawn paused, then turned her head around. Corrie could hear her taking several deep breaths, then she turned around, took a few more, and nodded. Finally she walked back to Corrie.

“I can see it,” she said. “I’m surprised you can’t. There are five glowing lines connecting your body and Paul’s.”

“Really?” Corrie glanced down. “I can’t see a thing. Maybe because the spell is on me?”

“Maybe,” Dawn said. “I could try taking it off you.”

“Show me where they attach,” Corrie said. “I’ll try it myself first.”

Dawn touched five points on Corrie’s body: each of her hips, each of her shoulders, and the middle of her forehead. Corrie thought she could feel a tingling in each spot afterward, but she might have been imagining it. Still… she thought she could do something with that.

She connected herself to her own inner magic, then reached for an imaginary line coming from her right hip. She took it and pulled hard, hoping she didn’t set anything on fire. There was a sharp pain, like she was pulling out a splinter, and it quickly vanished.

The pain, she was sure, wasn’t imagined. She must be doing something. She tried it again with her left hip, with the same result. She did her shoulders, repeated it for her forehead, then turned to Dawn. “What do you see now?”

Dawn closed her eyes briefly, breathed deeply, and then opened her eyes again. She grinned. “It’s gone! I think you did it.”

“Awesome! That wasn’t too hard.” Corrie turned to Paul. “Okay, let’s see if this worked!”

She took a step toward him at the same time as he took a step toward her. Neither of them were thrown back. There was no resistance. She must have broken the spell.

She grinned at him. “There you go! We’re not connected anymore.”

“You mean we’re not separated,” he said, taking ground-eating steps toward her with his long legs. “This is great. Thank you, Corrie.”

She took a step back before he could touch her. “Just remember, I’m only doing this to help you. I’m not interested in you romantically and I haven’t been in a long time. It’s just not fair that you should have this spell on you.”

He nodded. “I know. And I appreciate it.” He put his hand in his jacket pocket. “Let me do something to help you in return.”

Corrie started to shake her head and tell him that it wasn’t necessary—she really would prefer not to talk to him anymore—but he wasn’t listening.

He pulled his hand out of his pocket. He was holding a stone knife. Without a word, he leapt toward Dawn, knife in his outstretched arm.

Comments

Paul's reaction

I can't say that I'm that surprised. After all he probably blames her friends for "turning" her against him.

Fire won't work because she could hit Dawn so what can she do? Could she re-attach the spell?

In this sort of situation, I'm almost wondering if lethal force can be avoided? I suspect that, at the very least, she's going to have to do something that would knock him out.

I'm also worried that he is strong magically (from what Corrie could see in trance). He may not be trained yet but he is, magically, armed and dangerous.

More thoughts

I wondered if Professor Lal was keeping an eye on them. However, I went back to read the chapters when she saved Edie and it sounded like the monitoring was just for that evening.

The other thought that I had was so horrid that I feel guilty for thinking of it. It's somthing that, from a moral standpoint, is worse than death and would probably make Annie hate Corrie, Dawn and Edie.

{edit 1} Or Edith could call Leila for help?

{edit 2} Or Corrie (or Dawn) could use earth magic to vanish/turn Paul's weapon into something harmless?

Or Corrie could appeal to her father or Charlie for help?

Or the could reattach the spell but re-attach three lines to Corrie, one to Dawn and one to Edie? If he threatens anyone else then they've got two spare lines.

{edit 3} Whilst my personal favourite is the above (i.e. the distributed re-attachment of the spell) I know that Corrie has other options. Hopefully, it won't be necessary but, given her proficiency at air magic, she could change the air in his lungs to something unbreathable to get him to pay attention/incapacitate him.

{edit 4} How close are they to one of thing stations that calls campus security?

Sorry, I do not get it...

Sorry, I do not get what you mean. Especially the second paragraph.

None of your options are helping Corrie (except for edit 2 first line).

I think (and hope) that he gets banned from school for attacking Corrie...

mjkj

Clarification

If you've got someone attacking you (especially if they are armed) the best form of self-defence is to incapacitate them. In this situation it's a perfectly reasonable assumption that Paul is about to kill Dawn. Bear in mind that stalkers direct a lot of anger towards anyone they see as being "between" them and their target.

If you're in a life or death situation you may not have a choice but to kill the other person.

I have been in a situation where I felt that my only choice was kill or be killed (luckily I was rescued by some other people) but I did cross that line in my head.

The suggestion in the second paragraph is one I'm not sure that I should voice because I do feel ashamed for thinking of it but I will. I confess that, for a few seconds, I did wonder if Paul was a good musician (and whether they should tell the faeries to come and get him).

{edited as was repetitive before}

Attack

Well, yes, the attack might be to kill Corrie -- but if they go to find the faeries or others to help it might be too late for Corrie -- so the only way I see to deflect this attack is line one of your edit 2 of your initial post, or any other direct intervention -- if the others are not too stunned by his surprise attack...

(I just hope they are not...)

Any other action concerning him after that deflection has not to be immediately and should involve security first (especially since Corrie has witnesses). If that does not help the other actions you suppose might get a chance at being considered...

...Oh, I see, you were not thinking on the immediate response but the longer range one...

mjkj

Alternatives

It all depends on whether they time they have to respond can be measured in seconds or fractions of a second. If it's fractions of a second then making the weapon harmless and/or finding a way to directly attack Paul (e.g. turning the air in his lungs to chlorine) are the things that are achievable.

If they have seconds then:

Given that it's evening (and that the faeries are out and about during the evening) I'm pretty sure just calling out their names would be enough to get their attention. Having people suddenly appear[1] may startle Paul long enough to give others time to act.

Admittedly some solutions may require a bit more time and are not practical in the short term but the ones involving faeries could probably be put into action relatively quickly.

[1] We know they have that ability because Professor Lal suddenly appeared to rescue Edie.

{edited for grammer}

They were often quite

They were often quite desperately looking for some of the fairies, especially at night, so I don't think just calling their names would make them appear out of thin air. When Professor Lal suddenly appeared to rescue Edie, she had been following her because she had already figured out that she was in danger.

To answer your last question...

Right next to one. They're using the light on top of it to see each other.

What...

... the hell?!

More information

You might be interested in this news report. Stalking has been debated in parliament a lot over the last year or so. Escalating to violence is common (it's not inevitable but common enough).

If you want to see more see:
http://www.parliament.uk/search/results/?type=advanced&adv_all=stalking

Okay, I was wrong,

he is dangerous. Is dawn still in trance? That would make the situation even worse...

I do not think she is

I do not think Dawn still is in trance, since it seems like she got out immediately after each looking at Corrie...

I hope they are all alert enough to keep Corrie from harm -- and I hope the security will believe them and not paul when he tells on them attacking him out of the blue...

mjkj

Thinking of writng another fanfiction story

This, and the attack on Edie in Book 2, has given me an idea for a fanfiction story. However, I've got to work out the details first.

Wow...

What does he want with that knife? Does he want to kill Corrie, or maim her, or disfigure her?

And those pains while removing the connection are they affecting her movements now?

I hope Corrie will be fine...

*looking forward to the next update*

...I wonder what the deus ex machina will be :)

mjkj

Deus ex machina

I hope the solution won't be one of those!

I feel silly

Is it just me or did we only get one update this week? :(

{edit} I just saw the news post that said no chapter Monday.

Yes

Sorry about that! This chapter is a little bit longer than usual, though.

But I still want more. Lol

But I still want more. Lol

Fair enough

You could have donated for a Saturday chapter ;)

Hmm!

I thought about that, and then I thought you'd still be busy and decided against it.

:)

(first day of the new academic year tomorrow! but we all did plenty of fun stuff to distract each other.)

From what I read, the pains

From what I read, the pains faded quite quickly, so she should be fine. And I hope the girls will be able to defend themselves without the intervention of a deus ex machina. After all, they are three against one, even if he has a knife and the advantage of surprise. I just find it strange that he's attacking Dawn, not Corrie.

From what I understand of stalker psychology

His reaction doesn't surprise me.

I believe some stalkers rationalise the negative changes to their relationship with their target as "poison" from their friends and/or family (because they can't cope with the idea that their target really doesn't want to be with them). Therefore, by that logic, remove the person(s) in the way and they get their target back.

Of course, that's not true for all stalkers.

{edited 2nd Sep as missed out a word that changed whole meaning}

Dawn...

Sorry, I did not have that right...

I thought he attacked Corrie...

...but Dawn it is -- that is strange...

mjkj

I think we are overthinking it.

Well this is pretty much a quite nonmagical situation - magic shouldn't be the only possible solution. And they are still very unexperienced...

What really makes think something unexpected is happening, ist that Paul uses a stone knife. This is more than a little bit odd.

Oh good

Somebody noticed that. :D

Oh...

Oh, does that mean Paul is also a faerie???

mjkj

But

I don't think he is because Corrie saw that his magic had a specific location in his body whereas, for faeries, it's evenly distributed throughout their bodies. That doesn't mean that he's not some other mythical creature, though.

However, most sharp knives have wooden or plastic handles so it may not be iron that he needs to beware of (if that's the reason why the knife is made of stone).

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