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Chapter 24: Dark Night

Corrie had to admit, if only to herself, that she was getting anxious as she pulled on warm clothing to go out to meet Paul. (Thankfully, it wasn’t too cold, and she’d be able to move her hands without mittens on.) She wasn’t really sure why. She knew Paul wasn’t going to hurt her. He was a really nice guy deep down, or they wouldn’t have dated in the first place. The only problem was that he’d gotten fixated on her. By now he might even have found a new girlfriend. The thought cheered her up slightly.

But when Dawn came in and she saw her unhappy face, Corrie’s stomach plummeted again. Edie had a similar anxious expression. “Are you guys really worried about me?” she asked.

“We wouldn’t say we were if it wasn’t true,” Dawn said, reaching out to take her hand gently.

Corrie sighed. “I’m a little worried myself. And I’m not sure why.”

“Paul isn’t taking any magic classes, is he?” Edie asked. “He’s not in yours. And he couldn’t have gotten hold of that book.”

That would be a good reason to be anxious—the possibility that Paul knew magic, too, and had hidden it from her for some reason. It didn’t make sense, though. Wouldn’t he have taken the curse off himself if he could? “He’s not in our magic class,” she said firmly. “And I don’t think he’s in the other one.”

“He’s not,” said Dawn. “But that doesn’t mean he couldn’t have learned magic some other way. The magic the Circle of the Goddess girls did wasn’t from magic classes.”

“He certainly couldn’t have learned from them,” Corrie said.

“But he could have learned from the same people they learned from, if there is someone who taught them,” said Edie.

Dawn squeezed her hand, then dropped it. “If you’re really upset about going, we don’t have to. Paul might not understand, but it isn’t his feelings we’re worried about. You never worry, so if you are, you probably have something to worry about.”

Corrie shook her head and drew herself up, glancing half-consciously at her mood poster. It was still set on ‘cheerful,’ where she’d most recently put it. It had moved around on its own and affected her mood a while back, but now that Professor Lal had taken out the excess magic, that didn’t happen anymore. Still, she would have liked to have that as an excuse for her worrying. “It’s okay,” she said. “I am worried about Paul’s feelings. I feel bad that I haven’t done anything about the curse before now.”

“What if this doesn’t work?” said Edie.

“Then I’ll talk to Payton and Elena,” Corrie said. She wrinkled her nose. “I’d rather not have to, but I can’t leave him like that.” She zipped up her coat to her chin. “All right. Let’s go.”

They were quiet as they walked down the steps and out into the chilly air. It was a clear night, and the stars were thickly spread over the sky like spilled sugar. Corrie stared up at them as they walked. The moon was a low, bright light near the western horizon. Maybe she should have waited until the full moon—whatever small werewolf powers she had inherited from her father might be strongest then.

She shook her head and shoved her hands into her pockets. There was no use second-guessing herself now. They were almost there.

As she’d expected, it was dim but not too dark in the middle of campus where she’d chosen to meet Paul, and there was no one there. On a Sunday night after a holiday, especially now that it was nearly winter, everyone would be either off-campus or in their dorm rooms. Everyone except the four of them.

She walked forward into the arc of light created by one of the emergency phones and looked around. Paul wasn’t here yet. She could feel Dawn and Edie behind her, quiet but reassuring presences at her shoulders.

Seconds later, a dark, shadowy figure stepped just into the light and stopped abruptly. Corrie almost jumped before she realized that of course it was Paul. He was dressed all in black, like usual. He lifted his head and pushed down the hood of his jacket.

“Hi, Paul,” she said, smiling. “Aren’t you cold in just a hoodie?”

He shrugged, the movement rippling down his long arms. “I’m okay. I produce a lot of heat. How are you?”

“I’m fine, thanks.”

He nodded at her, gesturing with his pointed chin. “You brought your friends?”

“I might need some help with the magic. They know magic, too. You don’t know magic yet, do you?” The lie made her stomach twist itself in a knot, but she didn’t want to tell him the real reason. The whole point of this exercise was to make him feel better, and saying that her friends were there to protect her wouldn’t help.

“No. Maybe next semester.”

“I thought you were going to transfer to a different college.”

He shrugged but didn’t offer any response.

Corrie took a deep breath. “Okay. I’m going to see what I can do about this curse.”

Comments

Feelings

I would generally advise people to trust their feelings (as that's usually your subconscious's way of telling you that it's spotted something concerning). However, I suspect that Corrie doesn't know what's causing her to feel anxious.

I wonder

I wonder if Paul also brought somebody with him -- maybe some bad guys of various races...

Just hoping they make it out again unharmed...

"Everyone except the four of them." I guess that includes Paul? and what about faeries? they would and could be out and about also... :)

mjkj

First, Paul is not violent,

First, Paul is not violent, so I'm not surprised he went on his own. Second, what is that about the bad guys being "of various races"?!

I want the next chapter! I want to know how this goes!

Seconded

Well, we will see if Paul is violent or not...

With various races I meant: humans, werewolves, faeries etc. -- and they might lurk about in the dark...

Seconded :) I want the next chapter also...

mjkj

If you want the next chapter,

If you want the next chapter, it's just $10 away. :P $10 and she'll post a Saturday chapter :)

Oh, okay, sorry for the

Oh, okay, sorry for the exclamation point then. Various species might be more specific.

Ah, yeah, sorry

Sorry for the wrong use of the word then..., species indeed is better...

As I was writing the post species did not come to my mind so I was stuck with races.

mjkj

Heat?

Is this just a matter of the typical male=heater situation, or do we have yet another non-human in the mix?

Heat

Typical male=heater situation. I see guys wearing only hoodies as coats in the most ridiculous cold weather!

There's no character page. I'd never thought of that. I guess I could try to write up something. I'm not very good at that kind of writing!

So, perhaps...

... some of us could help writing them? :P Maybe you could make some headings, like "Edie" or "faerie" or "teacher" or "building" or something, and the texts could be sent to you first for approval... Or something like that?

Good idea

I'm willing to submit stuff for that if Clare says "yes".

However, we do need to set some policy guidelines first -- e.g. Should the character pages give spoilers or should we stick to the basics?

That sounds good

I would love to have help writing them. And Francisco has a point, too. It would be a good idea to work out what can go in the descriptions.

I was thinking just a cast page, though, not individual pages for each cast member--that would get unwieldy fast. The more minor characters certainly don't need their own pages.

Keeping them short

If we're keeping them short and not giving spoilers then we don't need much at all.

Clare?

Is there a character page somewhere? I looked on the home page and couldn't find anything...

Having something brief written up about each of the characters we've met would help, especially since this serial story is taking so long to write...

eh

As a guy I've gotta say that is true. I used to work in a freezer for hours at a time, that was generally at -10 and I only wore a hoodie in there.

And with the character page thing you could put more info by doing a spoiler tab type thing so that newer info goes under it and just the basics is what can be seen otherwise.

"the stars were thickly

"the stars were thickly spread over the sky like spilled sugar." I just wanted to say that I really love this line :)

Thank you!

:)

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