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Chapter 55: Miranda Swick

Sunday, November 23

Corrie, Dawn, and Edie had agreed that they would all go see Professor Lal. They’d all used the book, and Edie, after hearing about how the book had failed to give Dawn the instructions that would have helped her, and the fact that Professor Lal was worried about it, feared there might have been some malevolent magic on it that affected them. Corrie thought she was being over-cautious, but was certainly willing to indulge her; it was certainly safer to be too cautious than not cautious enough.

So they set out a little bit after three, walking through another light snowfall (the temperature had dropped again, and this one wasn’t melting) to the magic building. Corrie carried the book in her backpack, and she was the one to knock on Professor Lal’s door, which was slightly ajar.

“Corrie, is that you?” called the professor. “Come on in.”

Relieved that she was in (though why she would have thought the professor would have broken her word, she wasn’t sure), Corrie walked inside the office followed by Dawn and Edie. She slipped her backpack off her shoulder. “I have some good news for you, and a book.”

“Excellent.” Professor Lal looked up from her desk and smiled. It was much more brightly lit today, though at least some of that was certainly due to light reflecting off the snow. “Did you learn anything about your connection to the trance magic?”

“Yeah. It turns out my mom did a spell when I was a baby to separate me from my werewolf heritage. She was scared I would turn into a werewolf, I guess.”

“Interesting. Your mother did not attend Chatoyant College, I take it? May I ask what magical tradition she follows?”

“Uh, pagan?” Corrie hazarded. “I mean, we are pagans… She learned it from her mom, my grandmother. I don’t know where she learned it. My mom kind of said that there’s a lot of magic in our family, though.”

“I looked at them both in trance,” Dawn volunteered. “They both have a huge amount of magic.”

Professor Lal nodded. “That would certainly assist an incompletely trained magician to do a strong spell like that. Now, may I see the book?”

Corrie slipped her backpack off her shoulder, pulled out the book, and handed it to Professor Lal. She put it on her desk and bent her lamp to illuminate the cover. “The Practical Use of Magic: A Primer,” she read aloud, “by Miranda…” Her eyes widened.

“What is it?” Edie asked quickly. “Have you heard of her? We couldn’t find anything about her online.”

“A moment,” muttered the professor. She passed a hand over it, turned it over, and then flipped quickly through the pages. Then she put it down and her shoulders relaxed slightly. “I needed to check for malevolent magic.”

“I knew it!” said Edie.

Professor Lal raised her eyebrows. “Luckily, there is none. How did you know, Edie?”

“Uh… I didn’t, really. Just a guess. But if it was giving us bad information, it might have given us bad magic, too.”

“Your instincts are correct.” She frowned slightly, looking carefully at Edie, then continued. “You have, in fact, met the author of this book. She is better known as Mardalan.”

“What?” Corrie gasped. “But… how could she write this book? And why?”

“She has easy access to many materials. You said this book was in the library? I do not know how she might have gotten it there.”

“It was donated to the library,” said Dawn. “I found it in a box when I was shelving. Emi didn’t know who donated it. Do you think she donated all those books?”

“She may have,” said Professor Lal. “I will have to speak to the librarians. This is very disturbing.”

“How did you know she wrote it?” Edie asked.

“The way the name is written.” Professor Lal sighed, but her mouth quirked in a half smile. “Even when she attempts to be subtle, she is not. Though I suppose her ends were well enough served, since the three of you did use the book. If it were not for certain rules, and certain friends that you have, you would be in great danger from her. As it is, you are protected and she is ailing. But please let me know before you attempt any magic outside of my class.”

“Oh, I don’t think we’ll be trying that any time soon,” said Corrie.

“Will doing magic the way the book explained it hurt us?” asked Edie.

“Yes, if you attempt to use the magic on the campus without proper preparation. Dawn experienced that.”

Edie swallowed. “Okay. I won’t do that anymore. Are you teaching the magic class next semester?”

Professor Lal smiled. “No, you will have either Professor Agnew or Professor Strega. I assure you, though, that they are both more than competent and neither will lead you astray. But I’m sure you wish you were taking the class now.”

“I really do,” said Edie. “Now I have to wait a whole semester. But I will wait.”

The professor nodded. “Good. Now I think this book should be destroyed. The librarians will understand. I will see two of you tomorrow, and the other perhaps another semester.”

Comments

Who?

I thought Mardalan was still recovering from Yedara's attack? Then again, that was a couple of books ago so she may be well enough to do something like this. I'm wondering what other misinformation the book contains?

I'm wondering if destroying the book is the best course. After all, even misinformation is useful because it gives a greater insight into the mind of the person who attacked you.

It looks like the definition of "harm" that the faeries use is similar to the definition of harm that the demons in the webcomic Wapsi Square use. As it was explained to another character, "I'd literally have to plunge a knife into someone's chest or personally kill them. However, if I just 'talk' to them, whatever they do from there out is their own fault."

It also explains why Annie's kidnapping was not considered "harm" because they didn't lay a finger on her. She decided to follow the music and, however compelling it was, it was her action not theirs.

{edited to correct grammatical error}

Recovering

Well, even if she still is recovering, she could have sent those books by someone else...

I hope Professor Lal checks out the book for misinformation before she destroys it.

And I hope she will look into the library to find if there is any other book tainted by Mardalan...

mjkj

Yes

She's still recovering, and yes, their definition of "harm" is along those lines!

Also, the agreement that constrains the faeries from harming humans is not magically binding; they would have to be found to be punished, and no one knows where Mardalan is right now (well, almost no one--there are at least two other faeries who know, but they're not telling).

I'm sure Professor Lal will look into the misinformation before destroying the book, but she wants to make sure to keep it out of the hands of her students. Also, it will probably not come up again because this is actually the end of Book 8 XD

Theories about Lal, Marlin and a concern

I apologise if any of these are things I've said before -- I can't remember what I've actually put in comments and what I've only speculated on in my head.

Given how hard Lal took the revealation that Marlin was the one who killed students, and the fact that we know that Lal investigated those crimes, I've often wondered if Professor Lal is, among other things, the faerie equivalent of a CSI specialist and/or some other trained investigator. Her reaction wasn't just one of betrayal but that she should have worked it out.

I take it one of her official roles is enforcing the agreement and tracking down those who break it?

Am I right in thinking at all of Marlin's victims were part faerie? If that's the case then his actions amount to hate crimes.

However, destroying the book, whatever the motive, doesn't sit well with me. I always remember the quote, "Where they have burned books, they will end in burning human beings."

{edited for grammar}

Poor Edie

I hope she will have as much fun with magic as the others...

...it is a pity she could not join the class belated...

...I think Edie should ask Professor Lal to check her out -- maybe she can find the block that Leila (Yedara, if I remember correctly) put on her -- and maybe even remove it...?

mjkj

What we know

If she gets Professor Strega, hopefully the professor would be less nervous about being recognised.

Knowing

Well, the professors know that they know now -- at least the faerie ones. So I believe they will not be nervous about that anymore...

mjkj

Sudden death

Sudden death of book 8... :O

Well, I expected a bit more closure before :)

...but in hindsight the mystery of the book is solved so there is a sort of finish in it...

*looking forward to the next book*

mjkj

Here's hoping Clare doesn't

Here's hoping Clare doesn't take off too much time before posting the next chapter. Lol

Huh...

I just reread the chapter and I'm actually kind of wondering if I didn't mean for it to end there. It does seem awfully abrupt. The plot is complete, but there's not exactly a lot of denouement! So maybe I had just stopped writing. But then the question is, what else was I going to write?

Ending things

I know how hard it is end something (especially if it's going to link into a sequel). I'm going to have to re-write the end of Part 1 of my story because its end is also abrupt.

I don't know what you wanted to write it and I don't know if this would be something you would feel is right but I expected that Corrie, Edie and Dawn would discuss Professor Lal's information afterwards. Maybe even warn Roe and the others? Maybe they could have rounded off everything with a meal or making plans for the rest of the weekend?

Like American TV series, I think the Chatoyant College books tend to end with a little bit of relaxation after the main story or, if not relaxation, a bit of an epilogue. For example, book 6 ended with Leila giving Edith back her energy, making peace with Corrie and Dawn, and Edie helping Lorelei wash her sheets.

American TV series?

You must be watching different TV than me! The shows I watch tend to end with lots of action and cliffhangers. For example, one of my shows just ended the season with a huge explosion and a heart attack.

But I do try to end Chatoyant College books with some relaxation, after all the excitement in the story...

YMMV

I take it you're watching the type of series where each episode feeds directly into the next? I was thinking more about the type of programme where each episode almost stands alone. For example, last Saturday's CSI:NY[1] with ZNPGN LYBEP BBXVA TSBEG URJBZ NA (NAQUV ZFRYS) URFGN EGVAT GBQNG R (FURFN PURS) ORPNH FRURU NQGBP NAPRY GURVE QNGRJ UVYFG VAIRF GVTNG VAT.[2] NCIS tends to end most episodes with the various members of the team teasing one another or a minor crime being solved (e.g. who stole Di Nozzo's pen[3]).

[1] It was the episode where different parts of a man's body were found at the 4 corners of Hell's Kitchen.
[2] Rot13'd then split into groups of 5 letters to avoid giving spoilers.
[3] I'm not sure if that particular one ever happened.

WTF

It keeps eating my comment. In brief, I demonstrated my mad NCIS-quoting skillz and explained that I was talking about series finales, but you appear to be talking about individual episodes, in which case I agree with you. It sounds like we watch the same kinds of shows.

So...?

I take it Book 8 is the season finale then?

No, no

Book 8 is the season. Chapter 55 would be the season finale. It's far from a perfect metaphor but that's how I was thinking of it.

But...

The previous books (1-7) have felt more like episodes (where the final chapter or two) is the light-hearted bit at the end.

Well...

I suppose in that aspect each book has been like an episode. But they're long and split into many parts, which is more like a season to me.

And of course like I said it's not a perfect metaphor; each book is more like, well, a book! And most books in series end with some denouement (though that seems to happen less in the second book in a trilogy).

Whoops!

Just re-read Chapter 60 of Book 7 and realised what I said didn't apply to Book 7. It did apply to books 1-6.

Perhaps...

...as the plots get bigger, there's less time to relax in between books?

BTW, I am working on a wrap-up chapter for Book 8, so that will probably be up on Monday.

Faster books

They do seem to have annoyed some very powerful people.

Thank you for that.

*is relieved*

Ah, well, I am relieved I am not the only one that finds it rather sudden :)

And I certainly do not know what else you were going to write -- since I am not you :)

...but if you want some ideas or thoughts:
- you could Professor Lal have read the book and destroy it (if that is not part of the next book)
- you could have Professor Lal check Corrie out concerning her werewolf heritage if there are some traits showing
- you could let them gather together to discuss as to how they want to train in magic in the future
- you could have them or Professor Lal search the library for other dangerous books
- and as Francisco had already posted: them discussing the new findings

mjkj

Hmm

I like the idea of them going to the library. It could be interesting...

You guys don't think having them just tell their friends about their discoveries would be boring? I would think that would be redundant--not that they aren't going to tell Roe and the rest, but that a scene all about them discussing it would just rehash things that have already been explained for the readers.

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